假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume).给外教Ms Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
Dear Ms Jenkins
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua from your English writing class last term.I'm writing to ask for your help.I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation,and I have just completed my application letter and resume.However,I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used.I know you have a very busy schedule,but I'd be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes.Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.
Thank you for your kindness!